Be Excellent To Each Other
haiku criteria fail?I'm not a poet....but here is an example.....A haiku has fivesyllables and then sevenand then five again.WURD
JJOK needsto go back and count the syllables again. BLOW.
656 is wrongit should be 575learn to count Lost freak
But what is a sylLables I think is spelled wrongBee winner 3rd grade.
You have the tripletsand an enormous stick shovedup your poetry.
Haikus are so lameTankas are where it's at guysBut if you can't countThen a tanka is evenMore difficult to get right
These comments should be the actual post and not that xtranormal drivel.I'll start talking to Goat again in 2010... when lost returns :)
You know guy's, if you say any of these in that classic "Captain Kirk" voice to Spock, they kinda sound funny.A haiku will dowhere others manage to failyes they will mister.
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